I’ve begun reading through my draft of Lodestar in the last few days.  As I go, I’m leaving comments for myself.  Questions, suggestions, etc.  Already I’m catching things that need to be developed more, threaded through the later parts of the narrative.

I’ve also begun marking two different things in the manuscript.  Adverbs go in red and internal monologue goes in green.  I think redundancies had a color at some point but that ended.

As for my other project, the one that I’m outlining.  Well, that’s not going so well.  Every time I sit down to outline, I feel like a 2-year-old mid-tantrum.  I don’t want to outline, but it’s necessary for me to figure out if this project is viable in the least.  I need to finish this outline in the next few days, but I don’t think that it’s going to happen.

How are your WiPs going?