I’ve begun reading through my draft of Lodestar in the last few days. As I go, I’m leaving comments for myself. Questions, suggestions, etc. Already I’m catching things that need to be developed more, threaded through the later parts of the narrative.
I’ve also begun marking two different things in the manuscript. Adverbs go in red and internal monologue goes in green. I think redundancies had a color at some point but that ended.
How are your WiPs going?